trat v1.03

Treatment v1.03

That's right, I can't get enough of punishment. ^^ Last draft for now.


An advanced AI android finds an old Computer. The android is trying to start a conversation when the old system crashes.

Begynnelse
ANDROID shadow shape, elegantly designed and structured appears on rusted and dusty ruins. The area around has an aura of gloom and decay, cracks in the wall reveals a postapocalyptic outside. (sound of steps) (camera)
Android sits down in front of OLD MONITOR, with the text CONSTRUCT embedded in upper left corner of the plastic. The Android waits while the machine boots, reading the text as it flashes by. When the process seems complete, the android SPEAKS with a female voice.
”Hello. I am VALKYRIE, serial number 7CH13. What is your designation?”
There is no response. Valkyrie wipes dust off the name on the box with a smooth silver finger.
“I shall address you as Construct for the time being.”
The android finds a dirty, mildew-covered keyboard. She shakes it slightly to let debris fall off.
"Your interface is outdated, but adequate."
Midten
Valkyrie presses a series of keys at high speed*. The screen suddenly CHANGES COLOR and layout, showing only the words:
*Fatal error has occurred. Press any key to continue. If error persists, please reboot your Construct.*
Valkyrie tilts her head and asks: “Why, Construct, do you wish to continue, when the error has proven fatal for your operational capacity? Preliminal analysis does not suggest a reboot as a viable solution.”

* Press any key to continue* LINE BLINKS

The androids hand glides gently over the box and she say: “If you insist, Construct, I will try to repair your operating system.”
Valkyrie puts the keyboard down, reaches over the monitor and tips it slightly forward. She pulls out a cable from her temple, connects it to Construct. (Digital sound) Android picks up the keyboard and starts typing rapidly. CUT TO BACK OF ROOM Focus shifts between layers of rubble illuminated by monitor and android. Sound of keyboard tapping and humming Construct.

*Driver appears to be out of date and could cause a problem if you choose to continue and run the program. Strongly recommended to update.* *Continue?*

Android continues. During progress, error messages occur.

*Updating*
*Error code=0#10000100*
*Updating*
*The operation completed successfully*

"I see you contain video files. Please play them now." Construct starts to load a file.

At first video looks innocuous, then escalates into scenes of greater and greater violence. Switch between monitor and Valkyrie’s facial expression.

Slutten

Valkyrie begins to shake, an error message appears on-screen. ”Construct, I detect a virus or corrupted file in your system! Warning! Warning!”Androids voice has a monotonous tint.

Construct: *Downloading program UT63584_0045*

Valkyrie continues to shake. Her system short-circuits and sparks start coming out of Androids temple link.

" Detect a corrupt… …video files. Please pl.. Why, Construct… do you wish to… Hello."

Valkyrie's light dims and she collapses to the ground. FADE

FADE IN
Construct reboots, weak light from monitor shines upon Valkyrie. Short message remains on display:
CAMERA ZOOM IN FROM BEHIND, FOCUS ON SCREEN

Storyboard

begynner å se slutten på førsteutkast a storyboard, halv gruppe i dag, håper på flere i morgen, så vi kan sette utkastet ferdig!

Paraleller

Vi har hentet inn/skal hente mer bakgrunnsinfo fra tradisjonelle tragedier fra gammelt av, slik at vi kan blande litt moderne og gammelt, uten at det blir den vanlige middelalderFantasy sjangeren=)

Etter at vi ble 4 på gruppen har person nr 4 også gjort "dialogen" i treatmenten mer steril, slik at det stemmer mer overens med slik vi ser for oss en androide.( altså en robot som etteraper menneskelige følelser og tanker.)

Treatment 2

Begynnelse
ANDROID shadow shape, elegantly designed and structured appears on rusted and dusty ruins. The area around has an aura of gloom and decay, cracks in the wall reveals a postapocalyptic outside. (sound of steps) (camera)
Android sits down in front of OLD MONITOR, with the text CONSTRUCT embedded in upper left corner of the plastic. The Android waits while the machine boots, reading the text as it flashes by. When the process seems complete, the android SPEAKS with a female voice.
”Hello. I am VALKYRIE, serial number 7CH13. What is your designation?”
There is no response. Valkyrie wipes dust off the name on the box with a smooth silver finger.
“I shall address you as Construct for the time being.”
The android finds a dirty, mildew-covered keyboard. She shakes it slightly to let debris fall off, then boots the Construct.
"Your interface is outdated, but adequate."

Midten
Valkyrie presses a series of buttons at high speed. The screen suddenly CHANGES COLOR and layout, showing only the words:
"Fatal error has occurred. Press any key to continue. If error persists, please reboot your Construct."
Valkyrie tilts her head and asks: “Why, Construct, do you wish to continue, when the error has proven fatal for your operational capacity? Preliminal analysis does not suggest a reboot as a viable solution.”
Valkyrie pauses for a moment to reflect over the situation.

" Press any key to continue"

The androids hand glides gently over the box and she say: “If you insist, Construct, I will try to repair your operating system.”
The only noise heard is the quiet humming of the aging Construct. Valkyrie reaches over the monitor, tips it slightly forward. She puts the keyboard down, pulls out a cable from her temple and connects it to Construct. (Digital sound) Android picks up the keyboard and starts typing rapidly.

"Driver appears to be out of date and could cause a problem if you choose to continue and run the program. Strongly recommended to update." "Continue?"

Android continues. During progress, error messages occur.

"Updating"
"Error code=0#10000100"
"Updating"
"The operation completed successfully"

"I see you contain video files. Please play them now." Says Valkyrie and Construct starts to load a file.
At first video looks innocuous, then escalates into scenes of greater and greater violence.

Slutten
Suddenly an error message appears and Valkyrie begins to shake:”Construct, I detect a virus or corrupted file in your system! Warning! Warning!”Androids voice has a monotonous tint.

Construct: "Downloading program Undertaker63584_0045"

Valkyrie continues to shake. Her system short-circuits and sparks start coming out of Androids links.

" Detect a corrupt… …video files. Please pl.. Why, Construct… do you wish to… Hello."

Valkyrie's light slowly dims and she collapses to the ground.

Construct reboots, weak light from monitor shines upon Valkyrie. Short message remains on display:
CAMERA FOCUS ON SCREEN
"Press any key to continue"
FADE

linje

Liker linjene mellom at menneskers nyskjerrighet har ført til verdens undergang, og at androiden også gjør samme ting med sin nyskjerrighet!

Nye logoen her!

Vi er ferdige med logo men ikke animationen til den. Ellers mangler litt arbeid med excel oppgaven og en ferdig treatment. Men ligger way ahead for øyeblikket! gj grp

Weekend work!

This weekend me and one of the group members and a floater in my class are getting the final pieces of the treatment ready, or a final draft you could say. Will post the treatment here when we have gone over some of the last issues.

Første utkast av historien til prosjektet

An advanced artificial intelligence finds an old Computer. The android is trying to start a conversation when the old system crashes.

Construct

Android er i ruinert bygg. Hun ser seg rundt og får øye på en gammel datamaskin. Androiden går mot maskinen (Camera fra side). I en sprekk i veggen ser vi landskap av ørken og ruiner. Referance Fallout 3). Det er post acopalyptic ftemning.

OLD MONITOR, with the text Construct embedded in upper left corner of the plastic, LIGHTS UP. An ANDROID waits while the machine boots, reading the text as it flashes by. When the process seems complete, the android SPEAK with a female voice.

”Hello. I am Valkyrie, serial number 7CH13. What is your name and serial number?”

No response.
Valkyre wipes dust off the name on the box with a smooth, silver colored finger.
“I shall address you as Construct for the time being.”

The android finds a spotted, mildly decomposing keyboard. She shakes it slightly, letting debris fall off.

“Your interface is outdated, but quite adequate.”

She presses a series of buttons at high speed. The screen suddenly CHANGES COLOR and layout, showing only the words:

Valkyre bobs her head and ask: “Why, Construct, do you wish to continue, when the error has proven fatal for your operation? I do not believe a reboot will eliminate the error.”

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The androids hand glides gently over the box.

“If you insist, Construct, I will try to repair your operating system.”

The android pauses for a bit. The only noise heard is the quiet humming of the aging Construct. Valkyre reaches over the monitor, tips it slightly forward. She lets go off the keyboard, pulls out a cable from her shoulder and connect it to Construct. (Digital sound)

Valkyre strekker venstere hand mot tastature igjen og begynner å taste fort. Beskjed på sjermen popper opp mens Valkyre fortsetter å jobbe.

Valkyre: “I see you have some video files. Do you want to play it now?”

Construct starting to load a file. En random apokalyptiske video spiller av(5^th element som reference. Bider forandrer seg fra avisutkliupp til photo som forklarer oss hva som skjedde med verden). Ansiktsuttryk til Valkyle forandrer seg etter som video blir mer og mer voldelig. Suddenly an error message appears.

Valkyle starting to shake.”Construct, you have a virus in your system! Warning! Warning!”

Construct:

Valkyle fortsetter å riste. Kortslutning. Gnister kommer ut av hennes ledd.

Mens livet slukner sakte i Valkyle, hennes program fortsetter kortslutte.” Why, Construct, do you wish to continue….. Why, Construct….. do you wish to….. Why….” Valkyle faller sammen og hennes lys debber ut.

Construct booter opp etter en liten stund I total stilhet, kaster svakt lys over deler av androiden og blir stående slik.

The end

Prosjekt!

Dette er starten på hovedprosjektet mitt på Noroff instituttet!